This is an example of a reverse outline for the Vigansky article in the Green Book:
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Paragraph
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Says
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Does
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1
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Main
character playing softball
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Introduces
softball; catches attention
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2
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Main
character playing volleyball; injury occurs
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This
is where the conflict begins.
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3
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Main
character goes to doctor; surgery required
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This
heightens the conflict: injury won’t just heal on its own.
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4
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Main
character reveals her injury to team; they react badly
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This
heightens the conflict: will main character lose friends, support?
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5
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Main
character is feeling low about her condition; hits the garage and cries. Her
father comforts her.
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This
shows how the injury has affected the main character’s well being. It also shows a potential turning point.
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6
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Cheers
for team; attends physical therapy.
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Main
character seems to be improving both mentally and physically.
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7
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Another
surgery.
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??
Context.
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8
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Starts
improving; starts practicing.
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Main
character seems to have a different outlook after second surgery. We see
renewed effort and optimism.
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9
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Plays
in first game after surgeries. Reinjured.
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Contrasts
with first paragraph, and also raises more “bait.” What’s going to happen
now?
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10
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Finds
out she can still play with an injury if she can tolerate the pain. Plays
through.
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Shows
main character’s personal drive and strength of will.
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11
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Plays
in every game through the end of the season; helps team win championship;
gets another diagnosis.
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Main
character reflects and tells us what this experience meant to her:
“Bittersweet.” Proud, but sad.
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12
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Author
learned a lot and wants to work in orthopedics as a result of her experience.
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